Anyway, blog your plan to improve your essay.
- What could you do, specifically, to make it better?
doing this poorly would be to say, "I should use better examples and be specific with those examples." The irony of this statement would be that you'd be doing the very thing you are asserting you shouldn't do. Specifically, what could you write about, or what specific changes could you make to your paper to improve it. If you wrote to only part of de Botton's claim or to another claim altogether, this might entail a whole new plan or detailed outline for your essay.
- How would following this new plan or incorporating these improvements actually make your essay better? Explain. Use commentary/analysis.